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		<title>Page 56, Sentence 5</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[What better way to get back into the blogging spirit than with a game of tag? Jace from Jace Scribbles has been tagged to participate in a highly interesting meme. (At least, highly interesting for avid readers.) Here&#8217;s the gist: Open the closest book to you, not your favorite or most intellectual book, but the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What better way to get back into the blogging spirit than with a game of tag? Jace from <a title="Tagged" href="http://jacescribbles.blogspot.com/2008/11/tagged.html">Jace Scribbles</a> has been tagged to participate in a highly interesting meme. (At least, highly interesting for avid readers.) Here&#8217;s the gist:</p>
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<li><strong>Open the closest book to you</strong>, not your favorite or most intellectual book, but the book closest to you at the moment, and turn to page 56.</li>
<li><strong>Write out the fifth sentence</strong>, along with the following two to five sentences.</li>
<li><strong>Pass this along to five blog friends</strong>. (What kind of meme would this be if you didn&#8217;t require the (un)willing participation of others?)</li>
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<a title="Self Editing for Fiction Writers at Amazon.com" rel="nofollow" href="http://www.todayiread.com/amazon/0060545690/"><img class="border alignleft" title="Self Editing for Fiction Writers" src="http://www.todayiread.com/0/wp-content/uploads/self-editing-cover-205x300.jpg" alt="Self Editing for Fiction Writers Book Cover" width="205" height="300" /></a> At this time, there are approximately 18 books within arm&#8217;s reach (yes, literally), but<strong> the absolute closest book to me at the moment is <em><a title="Self Editing for Fiction Writers at Amazon.com" rel="nofollow tag" href="http://www.todayiread.com/amazon/0060545690/">Self Editing for Fiction Writers</a></em> by Renni Browne and Dave King.</strong></p>
<p>Opening the book&#8230;turning to page 56&#8230;aha&#8230;here we are&#8230;(I&#8217;m going to count from the first <em>complete</em> sentence, just so we&#8217;re clear)</p>
<blockquote><p>Well, not often, since at the very least it risks literary transparency. (<em>sentence 5</em>)</p>
<p>If you have an overriding dramatic mood for the scene that doesn&#8217;t really belong to any of your characters, then you might want to try this approach. The key element in Hoffman&#8217;s scene is the way the two sisters&#8217; lives collide at this moment, and for that to work, Hoffman needs to create a genuine sense of what each sister&#8217;s life is truly like. She can&#8217;t do this from a single point of view, since at this stage in the story each sister seriously misunderstands the other. She can&#8217;t write brief, separate scenes from the two points of view, since that wouldn&#8217;t let her build to the climax of Jimmy&#8217;s body. She has to jump from head to head. (<em>sentences 6-10</em>)</p></blockquote>
<p>By the way, if you are a <a title="National Novel Writing Month" href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">NaNoWriMo</a> participant and you intend to continue working on your novel, then I highly recommend <a title="Self Editing for Fiction Writers at Amazon.com" rel="nofollow" href="http://www.todayiread.com/amazon/0060545690/">Self Editing for Fiction Writers</a> as a companion to <a title="No Plot? No Problem! at Amazon.com" rel="nofollow tag" href="http://www.todayiread.com/amazon/0811845052/">No Plot? No Problem!</a> (<a title="No Plot? No Problem! Book Review" href="http://www.todayiread.com/no-plot-no-problem-chris-baty-review/">read review</a>)â€“it picks up right where that book leaves off. And while I&#8217;m on the topic of shamelessly recommending books for NaNo participants, grab a copy of James Scott Bell&#8217;s <a title="Plot &amp; Structure at Amazon.com" rel="nofollow tag" href="http://www.todayiread.com/amazon/158297294X/">Plot &amp; Structure</a>, which will help you flesh out your novel&#8217;s arc and transform a languid plot into an enthralling one.</p>
<p>Now it&#8217;s time to recruit some participants. I think I&#8217;m going to play it safe like Jace, while also subscribing to the spirit by tagging a few people and hoping they do it.</p>
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<li><a href="http://www.msbookish.com/">Ms. Bookish</a>, I&#8217;m positive you probably have some tantalizing piece of literature sitting right next to you at the moment.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.bibliophilemusings.com/">Brie</a>, I&#8217;m equally positive that you have something just as tantalizing sitting by you at the moment. (By the way, love the new design.)</li>
<li><a title="Literary Escapism" href="http://www.literaryescapism.com/">Jackie</a>, if not for tantalizing reading, then surely there is something interesting in all the word&#8217;s various definitions.</li>
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<p><strong>And anyone else who wishes to participate.</strong> It&#8217;s a party and everyone&#8217;s invited. Feel free to leave a comment to get some link love.</p>
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